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| 04/18/2003 07:14:58 AM |
Water Godby FiverComment: Greets from the Critque Club:
Hi there Fiver!
Initial Impression:
Colorful, A bit too processed for my tastes.
Challenge:
Certainly meets the challenge
Compostion:
This is rather weak in my opinion, but I'm not sure there's much you could do to improve it. For your subject and the surroundings it's decent. Maybe some clouds in the sky would have helped add some interest to the photo.. Not sure really.
Technical/Post-Processing:
This was the first thing I noticed about this pic.. The colors are very vivid and sharp, making the subject look fake. From your comments I can see that's what you intended and you succeeded well. However, from a score standpoint really manipulated photos tend not to do well here.
Overall:
Good job in achieving the affect you desired! Good luck in future challenges and don't let low scores stop you from developing your style.
-Matt |
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| 04/16/2003 02:30:24 AM |
The Four Elementsby dacrazyrnComment: This is great work.. It looks almost unreal! The only thing that bothers me is the hill on the right side looks a bit washed out. Easily fixable out side the challenge... good score for you! |
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| 04/14/2003 12:35:40 PM |
:()Hby EJComment: Too bad about the powerlines! It also looks like the horizon is tilted a little bit to the left. Other than those things, this is really really great shot. The contrasts are wonderful and the scenery is amazing. |
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| 04/14/2003 11:14:36 AM |
Waiting for Weatherby dsidwellComment: Hmmm.. this looks very similar to an idea I had. Good shot! Only change I would have made would be to have the subject looking at his watch. |
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| 04/14/2003 05:27:39 AM |
After the stormby marboComment: Heh.. I thought of this but didn't go down to take it. Horizon is a bit skewed, but good shot otherwise. |
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| 04/14/2003 05:15:25 AM |
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| 04/13/2003 11:52:38 PM |
Symmetrical Courthouse Towerby MustbelostComment: Greets from the Critique Club:
Initial Impression:
Simple, Effective, lacks "something".
Challenge:
This meets the challenge perfectly.
Composition:
This is both the strength and the downfall of this pic in my view. On one hand, the composition makes the symmetery perfectly obvious, but on the other it makes it a little bit boring. Including more of the sky, both on the sides and the top, might have made the photo a bit more interesting. I really like the illusion that's created by the symmetry - it makes the viewer feel as if the tower has no depth to it. I also really like the little bit of red on the windows, it serves as a counter-balance to the blue skies.
Camera/Post-Processing:
Nothing noticibly wrong here, which means it was well done!
Overall:
This photo has grown on me as I look at it longer... I still think it lacks the much cited "wow" factor, but it's a very nice picture none-the-less. Good job!
-Matt |
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| 04/12/2003 11:26:52 AM |
Symmetry lifeby zerocusaComment: Greets from the Critique Club!
I like this image a lot, mainly because it is a different idea. The colours are nice and vivid, espcially for being shot through bubble wrap!
The symmetry isn't immediately obvious, which could be one of the causes of the low score. One of the ways to improve this would be to crop out more of the left side, though I don't think it really needs it.
Good job, I really think this should have placed higher.
-Matt |
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| 04/09/2003 08:28:02 PM |
Forty Five Miles Per Hourby lennierComment: If it hadn't been for the nasty glare on the sign this would have ranked higher in my book. Actually, I think you could have dropped the sign all together out of the photo and I would have ranked it high. I love the greens and that lonely tree. |
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| 04/09/2003 08:19:38 PM |
Urban Rainbowby jgal76Comment: ehh.. ROYGBIV
Missing a couple colours there for it to be a rainbow.. and they aren't even the right order. Nice compositon, but it seems like the focus is just a tad bit off. Good pic none the less. |
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