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| 01/10/2011 01:12:07 PM |
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| 01/10/2011 01:11:22 PM |
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| 01/09/2011 05:33:08 PM |
they always play with the box insteadby posthumousComment: Critique Club Comment:
The expressions on the kids' faces are priceless, but the eye has to hunt for them when you first look at the shot because the majority of the image is taken up with the less-interesting details of the box surface and the wall/door/floor. I can see how this can be taken as the children playing a "hiding" game, but, for me, the faces of the children should be more prominent.
Maybe a shot directly down into the box, or a different angle altogether (such as the kids peering over the edge of the box) would have made this more interesting.
I like the color conversion a lot - although some, who prefer less contrasting black and white images, would prefer less contrast so that the girl's head does not appear to be floating by itself. |
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| 01/09/2011 01:25:49 PM |
on the right trackby disassociationComment: Critique Club Comment:
This is pretty good - great idea and just a few tweaks would make it great. The forearm doesn't really add to the image; the hand and the toy is really what this image is about. By either moving in closer, or cropping the top fourth of the image, you would get a better, more balanced composition.
A little fill flash would have brightened the colors and let you close down the aperture a bit more, or just aided you in stopping the action. |
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| 01/09/2011 01:14:09 PM |
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| 01/09/2011 01:13:04 PM |
01-52by salmiakkiComment: I love this. It would be great printed on a large canvas. |
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| 01/09/2011 01:12:15 PM |
dark_nutby daisydavidComment: Very pleasing. This comes across as an almost oil-painted abstract to me. Great use of overlays. |
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| 01/09/2011 01:10:43 PM |
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| 01/09/2011 01:09:54 PM |
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