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| 10/22/2008 08:49:19 AM |
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| 10/17/2008 06:59:19 PM |
The Trouble with High View Closeby ImagineerComment: I rather like this shot - it holds some connection with our cold yorkshire mornings in winter, I suppose. i'm not certain the composition is entirely happy - there's that central line that is a bit clumsy, and the speed of the sweep of curve on the right is perhaps a bit inconclusive - I mean, it takes the eye to a place that is not really comfortable, and so leaves a feeling of an unsatisfactory journey. I like your tonality, but think that little more excitement in the distribution of elements throughout the frame would have more impact.
Similarly, the two cars make a fairly strong eye-catcher in this image - they're brighter, they're familiar, and yet you have them completely obscured by those bushes. I wonder if you've played with your possible angles and compositions enough here - tried shooting from higher, or lower, or a few steps to one side or the other, and then assessed those shots when you got home? It just feels pretty plain to me that you could have found a more satisfying composition ... |
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| 10/17/2008 08:57:58 AM |
Planned Unit Developmentby banmornComment: Fine photo. It's the little touches of suggested humanity - those rubbish bags and the bin, mainly, that really give this its sinister impact. |
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| 10/17/2008 08:55:29 AM |
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| 10/17/2008 08:54:17 AM |
Doin' Yardworkby klkitchensComment: Nice image; reminiscent, in a way, of Martin Parr's work on England: the colour saturation, the humdrum subject, the off-beat but effective composition. |
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| 10/17/2008 08:53:01 AM |
Ice Cream Socialby colorcarnivalComment: I'm really not a fan of this processing: it has made plastic what might otherwise have been a fascinating shot. |
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| 10/17/2008 08:51:50 AM |
Neighborhood Watchby Les_FeckComment: Perhaps a little more definition in the street outside? I like the concept, but I wonder if a little more depth of field might have made the message plainer. |
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| 10/17/2008 08:50:35 AM |
Suburban Natureby ThatChickOverThereComment: Good shot. Composition works well, and that sense of the control of nature's usually more chaotic processes is well communicated. |
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| 10/16/2008 05:30:03 AM |
spending the morningby kolasiComment: Perhaps it's just from the edging into frame of that landing, but there's a good sense of a further world about this shot. Something we might, in our suburban fantasy, happily ignore whilst we feed the ducks? |
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| 10/16/2008 05:28:41 AM |
Greenurbiaby RingostarrComment: I rather like this one, for this challenge. The pull between the leading line of the path and the middle-ground and background subjects lends it a strong dynamic. The saturated green of the grass, the un-fenced path, the hyper-neatness of everything, all speak strongly of the expected un-natural tidiness of the suburbs; 'we can control everything, even to the riot of nature'. Makes you wonder what sinisterness goes on behind those facades. |
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