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by Breeee123

Comment:
Great image and idea! I find that the twigs on the left lead my eye out of the image to a degree. Maybe you could have trimmed or otherwise maneuvered them to remain in the frame.

Crusty
by MaryO

Comment:
I really like the idea, but I think it's a bit dark. Also, the nose should be in focus and the far left of the bread should be included.

Only Tourists Use These Now...
by rgdunn

Comment:
The lighting on this is excellent. I think the image would have been more effective if it was tighter, focusing on the gondolas. Maybe crop horizontally a bit above the far left tail and vertically midway between the two rightmost tails. (I had to comment as I have nearly an identical shot from a trip a few years back. However, the lighting isn't as nice on mine.)

Obsolete?
by cheekymunky

Comment:
I quite like the sentiment and the overall idea. I think the book needs to be much larger to be effective. I happen to recognize it, but wouldn't know what it was otherwise. Also, the image looks a bit dark, but I realize more exposure would have blown the white accents. Maybe you could increase the midtones a bit.