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| 03/17/2009 11:26:41 PM |
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| 03/17/2009 09:51:30 PM |
Smooth?by PNHComment by karmat: CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
Compositionally, I think this is generally good. I'm wondering if angling the plant so that it runs more on a diagonal through the upper left and lower right corners would make it more dynamic. Also, whilst I thinking cropping part of the subject out can be effective, I think cropping out the little bit that you did makes the composition look accidental and not quite balanced.
Technically, it is good. The focus is in a good spot and utilizes shallow dof effectively. The background is a bit bland in color, but it doesn't effect the shot hugely, I don't think, but a whiter background might make the greens *pop* a bit more.
Overall, it is a good shot and a creative interpretation of the challenge (though some may have zinged you for that).
Best to you in your next challenges and enjoy dpc!!
Karma |
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| 03/17/2009 07:55:43 PM |
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| 03/16/2009 10:44:11 AM |
Niagra's Furyby PNHComment by boyd2000: Nice view but it looks really oversaturated. Maybe you had to in order to show the rainbow, but maybe you could have selected and saturated just the rainbow. The water looks unreal being so green. I think just reducing saturation on the water would have made it better. And you used 640 pixels when you had 720. |
| 03/15/2009 11:37:33 PM |
Niagra's Furyby PNHComment by VitaminB: Good composition, and capture of the rainbow, though the colours seem to be off. |
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| 03/15/2009 09:15:31 PM |
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