Rebuilding the WTC: One Year Later
by Yellowpeep

Comment by sulamk:
Critique Club
COMPOSITION -CONTENT - I find this too centralised and I think taking it at an angle with the lens pointing upwards would have given a more dramatic effect The overall image could have been slightly brighter and crisper
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YOUR OPINION ON THE PHOTO - although I am not an american I can relate to this scene and the sense of desolation the figure and flowers portray definitely a good shot at photo journalism

Rebuilding the WTC: One Year Later
by Yellowpeep

Comment by DougPaz:
I like the tones although it seems as if it could be just a bit brighter..DPz

Rebuilding the WTC: One Year Later
by Yellowpeep

Comment by bod:
A very atmospheric shot, tells a story on it's own. Well done.

Rebuilding the WTC: One Year Later
by Yellowpeep

Comment by chrysalis:
Title and shot do not really gel here. Better title could be found. The shot screams about remembrance... not rebuild.

Rebuilding the WTC: One Year Later
by Yellowpeep

Comment by muckpond:
Nicely done. A bit dark, but a well-thought-out image. It draws the viewer in and inspires a wide range of emotion. Well done. muckpond

Rebuilding the WTC: One Year Later
by Yellowpeep

Comment by PTLParsons:
Timely news article. Good composition, execution needs some things. Photo needs lightened up some - so we can see the things hanging on the fence and their colors. Also need to see the man better. This is where your emotion is for this picture. Lightening the shot would have enhanced the emotion. Or that's my opinion. But women like the emotion of things. Otherwise good job. PTL8

Rebuilding the WTC: One Year Later
by Yellowpeep

Comment by vestanpance:
Nice shot, given recent events I could certainly see this on the front page. The person in the photo is a nice touch, it wouldn't have been the same without them there.

Rebuilding the WTC: One Year Later
by Yellowpeep

Comment by johnny_justjohnny:
good to see that the flowers haven't stopped arriving.
"oh beautiful for patriot dream that sees beyond the years,
thine alabaster cities gleam undimmed by human tears."

Rebuilding the WTC: One Year Later
by Yellowpeep

Comment by nards656:
I think I would have dropped the camera a little lower and angled it upward to show the empty sky. 7 nards656

Rebuilding the WTC: One Year Later
by Yellowpeep

Comment by Natasha:
Great impact and composition.