Utilitarian
by indigo997

Comment by titotapado:
Looks like a picture I already saw...is this a repeat?

Utilitarian
by indigo997

Comment by Journey:
Since the pencils are sorta key to this challenge they should have been highlighted rather than being so obscured by darkness. I also don't like those two diagonal lines on the model's back; it makes it look, to me at least, like she had been engaged in some SM ritual. Don't know whether this was caused by the light or something else. The shadows also obscure the left side of the model in a somewhat awkward way. The lights and darks would have worked much better if the model's back would have been turned more at an angle from the camera. Journey

Utilitarian
by indigo997

Comment by TrexX:
Nice idea, could be better if it was a high-key foto.

Utilitarian
by indigo997

Comment by justine:
Good idea, just poor lighting..Score 6 ~Kee

Utilitarian
by indigo997

Comment by johnny_justjohnny:
"i need a picture of a pencil" to "i need a picture of you topless"
you must be very smooth
way to go nice shot

Utilitarian
by indigo997

Comment by rjhawkin:
Im not sure what pencils have to do with this other than a cheap reason to take a nude photo

Utilitarian
by indigo997

Comment by jsabbarton:
This is a wonderful shot. I love the tones and the neutral background. The pencil use is subtle, but it worksâ€Â¦ Good luckâ€Â¦

Utilitarian
by indigo997

Comment by decoteau:
Good shot, but a little too dark.

Utilitarian
by indigo997

Comment by imperative:
Oh I see the pencil.

Utilitarian
by indigo997

Comment by just-married:
Concept: very good. Execution: could use a little help. Things that distracted me from your photo: her shoulder is cropped out, it appears accidentally -- I see no strong reason for it. The shadows across her back are distracting. Would have lined her chin up a bit more creating a nice line with her spine; it would also have been nice to see just down to the small of her back. The sepia tone is nice. 6