Searching for a former clarity
by JopsyDaisy

Comment by snaffles:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Wow, this is something else. A supermoon rising over a crazily tilting cityscape and a suited model with a light fixture for a head holding a lightbulb. Definitely searching for something! I gave this a 7 in voting. Glad I did. I like more abstract ideas brought to life like this.

I think the main problem here is more technical than anything. All the light sources are from behind, yet the model is lit from the front right (shadow cast to the left and rear). In reality the opposite would be true, the shadow should fall mostly to the front right on the ground ahead of them. Maybe a blending layer to help the model fit into the street scene? I think this is what pulled your score down. I tend to make the same sort of mistakes too so Ah feel yer pain ;-)

But you still finished in the Top Ten so it's not all that bad, and for the most part it's an interesting image and well done. Keep up the good work!

Susan

Searching for a former clarity
by JopsyDaisy

Comment by Ivory:
I agree this is very creative, congratulations on your top 10.

Searching for a former clarity
by JopsyDaisy

Comment by cutout:
weird

Searching for a former clarity
by JopsyDaisy

Comment by clickodak:
Very creative Give 8

Searching for a former clarity
by JopsyDaisy

Comment by Lydia:
7 from me.

Painterly Photo "outtake"
by JopsyDaisy

Comment by skewsme:
how very smart to add the paint to yourself

Josefine
by JopsyDaisy

Comment by posthumous:
this really does look like a painting.

Josefine
by JopsyDaisy

Comment by Ammie:
top 3 Love this. You did not photograph a painting, did you now?

Lady Scarlet McFluff the Purrrth
by JopsyDaisy

Comment by tanguera:
These guys are so weird and wonderful. If the blacks hadn't been so inky, I'm sure it would have placed higher. Great pose and attitude.

Josefine
by JopsyDaisy

Comment by pixelpig:
Like a bronze sculpture. And still so feminine.