The white collar boxing event
by candyyam

Comment by LisaMarie33:
Great perspective! A 9 from me.

Something beautiful
by candyyam

Comment by Paul:
Greetings from the Critique Club:

I think this may be the same model from your recent Librodo entry so you already know I'm a fan and of course she looks lovely here. This images doesn't have the power your 'Woman' image though and doesn't seem to be finished to the same standard. I can see how the shelf is horizontal but your POV has introduced some geometric distortion of the frame which does detract from the image.

Personally, I do like the bright light and feel it could have been emphasised even more. I'm not a fan of your crop though - your model is too good to make her this small on the screen to include some cushions...!

The critical question for this image is whether it fits the 'Fine Art' genre - for me, I'm not sure it did; it may have been effective within a wider Free Study brief but for me lacks the imagination that underpins much of the Fine Art work.

However, there's no denying that this is an effective image in a less loaded context.

Paul

The white collar boxing event
by candyyam

Comment by jamesgoss:
very interesting story. perspective is nice. something on the right side is irking me, I'm not sure what though. The fighters wearing red and blue make this feel borderline cartoony. love it.

The white collar boxing event
by candyyam

Comment by saintaugust:
awesome perspective!

The white collar boxing event
by candyyam

Comment by hernan43:
Nice perspective.

Something beautiful
by candyyam

Comment by Lydia:
Lovely... not sure about the off-kilterness of it... Seems like the windows could have been skewed to be level if not shot that way... still... I like this.

I like the colors... but the purple... catches my eye and won't let go... keeping me from the subject. (not voting)

Something beautiful
by candyyam

Comment by Dannisa:
Background is too blown out.

Something beautiful
by candyyam

Comment by curtpetguy:
Nice pose, very lovely model

Something beautiful
by candyyam

Comment by susielmt:
The angle of the window is distracting...

Something beautiful
by candyyam

Comment by bvy:
The blinding light and the tilt really subtract from this image.