WaitingForTheCall
by ronak

Comment by richy:
I like this a lot. And not a piece of fruit in sight. Good one.

WaitingForTheCall
by ronak

Comment by FactoryX:
Like the shot. But I think you may want to show a little more of the Cell Phone. (just because of the Title) : )

WaitingForTheCall
by ronak

Comment by Neuferland:
Your title tells me you're waiting for the call but I had to go looking for the phone, it's almost lost down on the bottom. I would have liked to seen just a bit more of it. The focus is on the table which, while it has a nice pattern is really rather boring. If the focus had been on the coffee, phone and snack with the table in the background this would have score much higher. A 4

WaitingForTheCall
by ronak

Comment by TimS:
The composition is weird in this, it looks like you just missed everything. There's nothing to focus on.

WaitingForTheCall
by ronak

Comment by GoodEnd:
You crop the main subject out! Interesting... Done by your will?

Black is not the colour of solitude
by ronak

Comment by ronak:
Thanks to everyone who viewed my submission... The comments are extremely useful to me as a novice photographer.

Black is not the colour of solitude
by ronak

Comment by bendb:
Nice use of negative space!

Black is not the colour of solitude
by ronak

Comment by LucidLotus:
Nice contrasts in this image. I do think the white is a bit harsh - I'd like it better if it was a little toned down. That said, it really sets off the subject, both her skin tone and the black burqua?. I like the long look of the photo, but would prefer it cropped a little, I think it would still hold its length well. Good composition, the girl looks alone and has a sadness to her that I can easily equate with isolation and solitude. Nice job. 7

Black is not the colour of solitude
by ronak

Comment by JC_Homola:
Interesting take on the challenge, I really like the compositions. 7

Black is not the colour of solitude
by ronak

Comment by Trinch:
The positioning of the subject doesn't really work for me. There is just too much empty space in the photo. Clearly that was your intent so maybe it's just over my head. (no pun intended)