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11/11/2003 06:45:43 PM |
| an interesting moment to depict. I want to see more of the phone, better focus, and I'd adjust the angle so the table top was the only background. |
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11/11/2003 12:10:16 AM |
There's perhaps too little of these objects in the picture to be called a still life. Also, the lighting isn't very interesting (flat). And since we don't know anything about the call, I have trouble relating. (Though I am a big fan of starbucks!)
I think a closeup of the contents of the cup might have been an interesting still life. Or at least maybe a top down arrangement of cakes with the startbucks cup as the "non-cake" element, taken from the top, with good light. Maybe next time. |
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11/10/2003 09:03:04 PM |
| Beaut..i hate product placement, but this seeks obviously to go beyond that and illustrate corporate america, or maybe its lesser cousin, impatience of youth. |
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11/08/2003 02:01:02 PM |
| The title puts emphasis on the phone, but the picture does not. Focus in on the table, instead of the coffee etc. |
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11/07/2003 02:58:50 AM |
| Odd cadre of a good metaphor |
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11/06/2003 04:50:09 PM |
| I like this a lot. And not a piece of fruit in sight. Good one. |
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11/06/2003 01:13:57 PM |
Like the shot. But I think you may want to show a little more of the Cell Phone. (just because of the Title) : )
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11/06/2003 08:03:58 AM |
| Your title tells me you're waiting for the call but I had to go looking for the phone, it's almost lost down on the bottom. I would have liked to seen just a bit more of it. The focus is on the table which, while it has a nice pattern is really rather boring. If the focus had been on the coffee, phone and snack with the table in the background this would have score much higher. A 4 |
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11/05/2003 05:01:08 PM |
| The composition is weird in this, it looks like you just missed everything. There's nothing to focus on. |
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11/05/2003 01:12:53 PM |
| You crop the main subject out! Interesting... Done by your will? |
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