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Comment by syamjonimi:
This would have gotten a better score from me without the flashlight. The flash in the glass and at the bottom of the lantern are distracting and makes my eye want to focus there. =7
syamjonimi

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Comment by scw1217:
A good visual contrast with the new and the old together.

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Comment by floyd:
Nice arrangement of lanterns through the ages. Well done for taking the time to find this collection. Your picture is nicely focussed but lacks detail in the shadow areas. It looks like you've pushed the contrast too far. Overall an excellent shot.

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Comment by chariot:
It just looks like a jumble of crap. it looks like you just tried to put them as close together as possible and then took a snapshot of it. Try setting thsi up again and moving things around. If the big thing is a lantern why not try standing it up. How about showing the front of the flashlight. At this angle it could be something else. Also, the black flashlight blends into the background. Try doing this on a white background. Also, try coming up with a title. Untitled just doesn't fit. It illustrates a lack of creativity and effort to try and make the best photo you can. -Chariot

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Comment by jimmsp:
Something old. Use your photographic technique to emphasize the age of your subject.
Composition - quite good. I would like to see it witout the flash light for comparison
Technical Aspects - very good
Meets Challenge - yes
Visual Impact / Originality - high

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Comment by indigo997:
might have worked better without adding the newer flashlight. would be cool to use the black background and put a light behind the lantern so that it looks lit

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Comment by jsabbarton:
You should not (in my opinion) have used the modern torch. It also makes the picture too busy. Lighting is great, in fact, that torch is really my only beef. An old light in the dark would have worked really well... Sorry to sound so negative. (5)

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Comment by Froober:
I really like this but wish you had kept the plastic out. Great colors and lighting! 8 Lisa

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Comment by vonnie1956:
I would have liked this better without the flashlight. I think the flashlight took away from the picture.

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Comment by ron:
more distance between the elements would help me see each independently and all as a group, I think