Bird Geometry
by sujoy9875

Comment by Dibutil:
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Message edited by HBunch - Critique Club status removed.

Bird Geometry
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Comment by MattBL34:
hahhahahahahaha

Bird Geometry
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Comment by Firstrich1:
your title takes the viewer to the mage of the birds...which if taken as the main subject may have worked...they do appear to be looking out of the screen in two different directions. What hurts this image for me is the eyes are pulled to the highlights on the trees. Also the palms??? lower left and the time stamp lower right. maybe a tighter crop giving the birds and the branches they sit on a greater roll in the overall composition of the shot. hope this helped:)

Bird Geometry
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Comment by JoelHSmith:
You're digital camera puts a date on the pic? Weird. What kind of camera do you have? I'd like to know. Please PM me.

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Comment by jbeazell:
the title of the image is in the frame, and the birds don't seem to indicate that something interesting is outside the frame.

Bird Geometry
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Comment by rickhd13:
I don't get the feeling of an off screen expectation from this...the date stamp in the corner is very distracting also

Bird Geometry
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Comment by BrennanOB:
Time stamp is a nice touch

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Comment by Prof_Fate:
get the date and time off the picture!

Bird Geometry
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Comment by mirdonamy:
What is the offscreen expectation here? The birds are very dark. I think you need to take this photo from a different angle.

Bird Geometry
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Comment by Paclo:
I really like this photo (but not the date). It is wonderrfully composited and you have caught a perfect weird moment. I don't think it has anything to do with the challenge, though. If it was 'patterns in nature' I would have given it a ten. If you want to fuss, take out the tiny off-angle frond bits and the little bits of branches on the edge of the frame at the right. Take more shots like this.