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| 06/03/2007 03:00:37 PM |
Religion in the Rockiesby ClayaComment by Stiger: Lovely shot. Nice framing. Although the speakers (or whatever they are) in the lower corners are a little out of place in the photo. |
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| 06/03/2007 01:32:38 PM |
Teton majestyby ClayaComment by Dirt_Diver: Looks very Bob Rossy. I like the reflections on the water and the dark blue sky, you really did a good job here. |
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| 06/03/2007 08:11:20 AM |
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| 06/01/2007 10:47:09 PM |
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| 06/01/2007 08:44:33 PM |
Teton majestyby ClayaComment by orvaratli: I like this one. If you had reduced the brightness of the upper part so it would match the lower part it would have been perfect. You can see on the snow on the upper part that its to bright and looks burned out. |
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| 06/01/2007 07:39:57 PM |
Teton majestyby ClayaComment by Judi: Good contrast over the bottom half but needs work on the top half. Lose the blue border. |
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| 05/30/2007 02:58:08 PM |
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| 05/30/2007 11:18:23 AM |
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| 05/23/2007 02:11:39 AM |
... legsby ClayaComment by PaulE: Greetings from the Critique Club.
Hi Clay,
Is this your leg?
A good concept - many of us have very positive connotations with beautiful, silky-smooth, shaved legs. Unfortunately you haven't really conveyed the idea of silky-smooth here. I think perhaps if there had been more smooth leg, and less ripples of foam it would have doen better. My main issue here is the lighting. There is a little bit of noise in the foam shadows and in the tiles in the background which indicates inadequate lighting. Was this shot under the normal bathroom lighting? The tiles in particular add nothing to the overall image - perhaps a closer crop on the leg would have worked. In conclusion - showing more leg is good.
It is my hope that these insights are helpful and constructive. Please feel free to PM me if you have any questions regarding this critique. And please remember to mark it "Helpful" if you found it so. Good luck with future challenges.
Cheers
Paul |
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| 05/21/2007 11:36:57 PM |
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