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| 06/30/2004 12:40:18 PM |
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| 06/30/2004 03:52:40 AM |
Katby rubyrednailsComment by hgpayne: Focus is a bit soft, especially at her eyes. Your background is so close to the subject, I see the shadow and the texture in the drop. |
| 06/30/2004 02:19:52 AM |
Katby rubyrednailsComment by wingy: I'm guessing you wanted this to be soft focus, but it seems to just be blurry. Maybe reading up and experimenting a little more with soft focus could help out. |
| 06/30/2004 01:55:28 AM |
Katby rubyrednailsComment by photom: Kat is a nice-looking model - shot with a single light (flash?) For a portrait - try to get the eyes in 100% sharp focus. It would also be better if you included all the hair at the top. |
| 06/29/2004 11:20:09 PM |
Katby rubyrednailsComment by magnus: I think you may have been trying for a soft-focus effect, but it just looks out of focus. Check out the 'Soft-Focus' challenge some months ago or search for soft focus in the forums, there are lots of ways to do it and I can certainly see how it might have worked here. Better luck next time! |
| 06/29/2004 10:51:36 PM |
Katby rubyrednailsComment by GeneralE: Pretty even lighting and minimal shadows give you a good exposure. This seems as though it "can't decide" whether to be sharp or a soft-focus portrait -- it seems kind of in-between without being OOF either ... I also can't tell if your model is relaxed or tense ... |
| 06/29/2004 10:46:04 PM |
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| 06/29/2004 05:25:33 PM |
Katby rubyrednailsComment by djscarrd: The glare on her eyes seems to be a bit distracting. Also photo seems out of focus. |
| 06/29/2004 02:42:14 PM |
Katby rubyrednailsComment by hopper: Seems nothing is in focus and the lipstick is a little bright. She has very pretty eyes. |
| 06/29/2004 01:34:11 PM |
Katby rubyrednailsComment by dacrazyrn: I like the look on her face. The focus needs to be onto the eyes. A soft focus works good, but it is throughout the shot and makes it lok blurry. Bringing her away from the wall to about 3 feet or so would eliminate the shadow, too. |
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