The British are Coming
by rll07

Comment by scalvert:
Refreshingly original. Great opportunity, but the "muzzleloader moustache" on the right ruins it for me.

The British are Coming
by rll07

Comment by frumoaznicul:
I really like this, it's a nice story, verry well captured in tehnical terms, sharpness colors and everything, but compositionaly I think it could be better. I feel the crop is a bit too tight, I'd like to see the entire weapon of the girl on the right and also I'd like to see the one in the left not so close to the edge, somewhere in the 3'ds area. Anyways it's a beautiful picture.

The British are Coming
by rll07

Comment by sixmacs:
Too bad about the musket across the face. Would have been nice.

The British are Coming
by rll07

Comment by lecalan:
Love this idea, just a shame that the musket is covering the other child's face.

The British are Coming
by rll07

Comment by gajmaj:
The two things that detract from this image are the rifle entering from stage left without an owner and the rifle that seems to slapping the girl in the face. Perhaps the young defender on the left could be aiming the rifle in a classic pose (butt to shoulder) and you could safely lose the rifle entering from the left.

The British are Coming
by rll07

Comment by tyt2000:
The gun in the middle is covering the girl's face, I think it would have looked better with the gun pointed another way...

The British are Coming
by rll07

Comment by cghubbell:
Would have been nice to find an angle that didn't obscure the girl's face.

The British are Coming
by rll07

Comment by soup:
the gun over the girls face is a bit distracting

The British are Coming
by rll07

Comment by kncoughlin:
Gun is in front of girl's face.

The British are Coming
by rll07

Comment by willem:
The gun across her face spoils it for me, would want to see her expression.