Back from the Candy Store
by bmatt17

Comment by photom:
Nice colors - cute model. Pix seems very staged and static.

Simple Elegance
by bmatt17

Comment by cmangis:
Nice; I am enjoying the slight tilt to the shot, which makes the balance feel slightly off balance. Could be a little sharper, and I'd prefer a plainer background, which is just personal taste.

Simple Elegance
by bmatt17

Comment by doctornick:
This is a great idea but the colour seems off, unless you intended for it to look bluish. A white balance adjustment is called for here.

Simple Elegance
by bmatt17

Comment by Stagolee:
Great idea not sure about the backdrop or table cloth or whatever, and the main subject does seem to need to be little sharper.

Back from the Candy Store
by bmatt17

Comment by dinny:
focus is too much on the boy

Back from the Candy Store
by bmatt17

Comment by imolaavant:
I like the bakdrop and how the creases (diagonal & horizontal) lead the eye back to the subject. The flash is a bit too harsh and casts too defined of a shadow behind the boy. You might want to try bouncing or defusing the flash next time (can be done w/ a peice of paper if you only have the built-in flash). My only other thought is that the blue on blue is a bit detracting.

Back from the Candy Store
by bmatt17

Comment by SMW409:
Nice crop exposure, but had to search for the chocolate

Back from the Candy Store
by bmatt17

Comment by alisasaur:
This is a really cute photograph!! Everyone can relate to childhood memories of going to the candy store :) I'm not sure if I like the background, however. I think a background of something child like would suit the photo more. This is very cute, though :)

Simple Elegance
by bmatt17

Comment by justine:
The glass appears to be leaning to the left and the background is washing out any sparkle or life in the glass/liquid. Just looks flat. Good idea.

As Free as the eye can see.
by bmatt17

Comment by David.C:
I think it would have been better with her on the other side of the bars, hanging off and looking into the distance. This has too many bars around her.