Tricycle Trauma
by Travis99

Comment by Natator:
Very nicely done indeed.

Tricycle Trauma
by Travis99

Comment by Zensimple:
Great DOF.

Tricycle Trauma
by Travis99

Comment by Gatorguy:
I love the drama in this shot. You did a great job of telling a story.

Tricycle Trauma
by Travis99

Comment by riotspyne:
I lLove this, was this staged?....love it anyways

Tricycle Trauma
by Travis99

Comment by soccerdad:
Interesting tension created between the infocus tricycle and the people who really want to be the subject. The horizizon is a bit unlevel and that usually hurts here at DPC.

Tricycle Trauma
by Travis99

Comment by alanbataar:
interesting composition -- really tells a story. The tilt of the horizon seems almost accidental, perhaps a more exaggerated tilt might increase the drama, as would (perhaps) a bit more contrast.

Complicated Phobia
by Travis99

Comment by hlswilson:
Greatings from the Critique Club.

I think the top portion of this shot is very strong. The shadows and highlights in the beams play off each other nicely. I find, however, that the shot loses something in the lower half. It looks as though there was quite a bit of post-editing in the trees under the bridge. That isn't a bad thing, but the effects are not consistent. In some places the trees are deep and dark, but then look flat and undersaturated in a nearby area. I think I would have prefered to have seen the shot with consistently dark trees, causing my eyes to focus primarily on the beams hit by the sun. I like the composition, with the complex lines paired against the softness of the blue sky. Good work!

Tricycle Trauma
by Travis99

Comment by Koriyama:
Nice story, interestingly told.

Complicated Phobia
by Travis99

Comment by photom:
Definitely complex and great lighting to boot. It seems to be oing downhill from left to right - which is ok, but would probably be more effectice going uphill. Sky is great.

Get Spanked
by Travis99

Comment by graphicfunk:
Very nice concept with great lighting to subdue subject. Background is very fitting. Bumping up.