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Comment by pauld:
Maybe add something else into the composition to show what the idea is that got broken...

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Comment by shortredneck:
Very well composed and focused. 10 shortredneck

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Comment by HBunch:
This is very nicely in focus. I love the grain on the wooden table. This kind of represents my frusteration in the pencil challenge. lol. The lighting is great and I love the angle. To the left of the photo where the pencil goes off the photo, there is a white object that looks like it is holding the pencil up off the table. I think the photo would have higher visual impact if we couldn't see that. Would seem more like the pencil is hovering. Great idea and good luck in the challenge.

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Comment by Kavey:
Love the texture of the floor and the opened out tip where the lead has fallen out. What's the white triangle at the left?
6, Kavey

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Comment by autool:
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background7,
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing9,
Challenge: Does your entry meet it?10,
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 5,
Total Averaged Rating8. Autool

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Comment by quarx:
i love the concept

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Comment by mscott821:
Good macro idea.

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Comment by lionelm:
I like the colors, textures ... what is the piece of white we see on the left under the pencil ?
6

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Comment by floyd:
Good focus and DoF Good light.

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Comment by justine:
He hee! Love it, good work, nice DOF, crisp shot. Score 8 ~Kee