Inside Outside
by yael27

Comment by neenee1999:
Very creative, I like it

To keep us happy
by yael27

Comment by dr rick:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

The subject is certainly appropriate for the challenge, but this interpretation isn't very compelling. A vertical format would have worked better, not only having the entire figure included but allowing a more dynamic composition. An organic element such as a real plant would add interest as well. But the photo would benefit the most from more interesting lighting. Having the key light more to the side would better bring out the three dimensional form.

Hopes at the "Kotel" in Jerusalem, "Mini Israel"
by yael27

Comment by just-married:

Originally posted by Jinjit: Wonderful picture! great lighting, original idea! Too bad so little knew what it was all about. I think it should've been in a much higher place.

I agree - I gave you an eight. You deseved to place above MANY of the photos that are higher.

Hopes at the "Kotel" in Jerusalem, "Mini Israel"
by yael27

Comment by Jinjit:
C'mon guys, haven't you heard of "the Kotel"?? The western wall in Jerusalem?
Man... and I thought my knowledge in world geography was poor... :(

Anyway, it's just a miniature model - but a good one!
Wonderful picture! great lighting, original idea!
Too bad so little knew what it was all about. I think it should've been in a much higher place.

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Message edited by author 2004-09-01 09:02:32.

Hopes at the "Kotel" in Jerusalem, "Mini Israel"
by yael27

Comment by TacoVendor:
May be a real image, but these look like people from 'The Sims''

5 from me.

To keep us happy
by yael27

Comment by claudia26:
very retro - I would have preferred it if the feet and the mushroom hadn't been cropped like this

To keep us happy
by yael27

Comment by dwterry:
Good use of depth of field to keep the background simple. Good luck in the challenge.

To keep us happy
by yael27

Comment by arngrimur:
Very sweet.

To keep us happy
by yael27

Comment by Gatorguy:
I don't think you should have cut the feet off.

Hopes at the "Kotel" in Jerusalem, "Mini Israel"
by yael27

Comment by FeosMom:
Are these dolls? The people seem to be the same size and flat.