Lace in Wind
by lyta

Comment by arngrimur:
A fresh shot but the framing is IMO too artificial.

Lace in Wind
by lyta

Comment by Dusty:
Would have been a very nice photo had it not been blurred so much.

Lace in Wind
by lyta

Comment by Pidd:
I love the colors and the framing. Don't like the motion blurr. This would be better sharply focused I think.

Lace in Wind
by lyta

Comment by ximending:
The framing shape doesn't seem to have any relationship with the very interesting flower shapes you've taken, therefore it seems extraneous to me.

Lace in Wind
by lyta

Comment by emorgan49:
but what is the frame??

Lace in Wind
by lyta

Comment by dwolff:
Wondering how you got your frame. Looks kind of like a vignette filter. I do like how some of the plants seem to be blowing in the wind.

Hope springs eternal
by lyta

Comment by nsbca7:
The half blurred brackground to the left is distracting. Blurr it all the way or bring it into focus

Wood you get to the point.
by lyta

Comment by gaurawa:
hey Lita,
I like this picture, the angle that you chose and the texture and clarity. But this needs a little more DOF IMO, also give a little more space for the lines to merge a little ( the crop it too tight ). I don't know if F8 is the min. aperture your camera supports, but this might look better with a lesser aperture and if you showed the expanse more.
Also try to focus on nearly 1/3rd distance away from you keeping a low aperture, that might help increase your overall depth of field.
You can also try to convert this to b/w using channel mixer and get a more vibrant picture. the textures might get more prominent with a b/w conversion.
cheers,
KG

Message edited by author 2004-08-30 16:54:17.

Hope springs eternal
by lyta

Comment by gaurawa:
Its not very clear from the photo what you were trying to show and I need to read the title to understand anything about it ( and relate how it meets the challenge ).
The glare on the subject is distracting. IMO the presentation is neither attractive nor intriguing...
I know I have criticized you a lot but this is my most honest opinion...
At my screen it looks a lot brighter, you might like to play with curves a little and saturate the green a bit to add contrast.

Hope springs eternal
by lyta

Comment by zagreus:
Excellent colors and exposure although the green on the left needs to go.