LUCKY STRIKE SMOKESTACK
by MelTech1

Comment by OdysseyF22:
Ironic

LUCKY STRIKE SMOKESTACK
by MelTech1

Comment by pineapple:
I see the humour!

LUCKY STRIKE SMOKESTACK
by MelTech1

Comment by bgslaw:
Sharp and vibrant. Impressive.

LUCKY STRIKE SMOKESTACK
by MelTech1

Comment by JunieMoon:
Just don't find the subject all that great. You did a nice job on the colors, though. Also the image is tilted. You can straighten the composition to get less slant.

LUCKY STRIKE SMOKESTACK
by MelTech1

Comment by Artifacts:
LS/MFT

EBONY GLAMOUR
by MelTech1

Comment by Phil:
Greetings from the Critique Club Mel.

Your wife is certainly lovely and I am quite fond of the pose. Her stare is quite inviting as well.

The first thing the voters will notice is the image size. You will find that you will automatically start out at a disadvantage when you post up an shot of such small dimensions. As far as technicals go I think the exposure is fine. I do think you need some unsharp mask and levels adjustments here to bring out some pop. Also, for a glam shot you'll want to try a different backdrop and something other than a shirt. She'll need some make-up as well. Not necessarily needed for her beauty but for a glam shot it is a must.

Overall a pretty lady that you should be proud to show off.

Thanks for the opportunity to critique this image Mel.

Cheers - Phil

EBONY GLAMOUR
by MelTech1

Comment by DefyTime:
Good shot

EBONY GLAMOUR
by MelTech1

Comment by petrakka:
not photojournalism, way too small, washed out. nice expression.

EBONY GLAMOUR
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Comment by DemonLlama:
Crop is too tight for my taste and I don't get the 'glamor' part of it from just a face

EBONY GLAMOUR
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Comment by k4ffy:
too small and the colors are a bit washed out.