keep out
by nlghttrain

Comment by melismatica:
I think the angle is a little to wide at the foreground, opening up the links a bit. The result is I get more of a sense of the background beyond the fence then the actual pattern the links make.

puzzled
by nlghttrain

Comment by shudderbug:
well done! 8

keep out
by nlghttrain

Comment by gurlwithapen:
nice DOF

keep out
by nlghttrain

Comment by mferg265:
I like this shot.

keep out
by nlghttrain

Comment by joycobb:
Cool perspective and nice rusty texture. What are they keeping you OUT of?

puzzled
by nlghttrain

Comment by sherpet:
Clever.............

puzzled
by nlghttrain

Comment by hanneke:
I miss a little spark in this photo

Steamboat willy
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Comment by sherpet:
I like tihs so hope it does well............

Just another night for a video game fan
by nlghttrain

Comment by Rikki:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

The image in itself lacks the "punch" that most DPCers are looking for in all our challenges. The use of BW, in my opinion, added to the lack luster display that most people saw during the voting process.

The image for one is too dark and the main focus, which is the monitor of your television, is too bright and lacks definition. there is an amount of visible noise that is apparent in this image.

In my opinion, if this image were in color as opposed to a desaturated image, there would have been a bit more interest. The silhouette is great and adds visual drama however, the bright screen overpowers this and most DPCers including myself will just give this a 4 and move on.

Light and detail is the key to make your audience stop and let the image sink in. As always, these are just my personal opinions on this image. Please take it with a grain of salt. We are all out here to learn ;)

I have seen your portfolio and there is promise of definitely breaking out of the 4 slump. Keep on shooting and continue to learn from the folks in our group!

Rikki

puzzled
by nlghttrain

Comment by espy2:
Very creative!