Undressing
by HillWalk

Comment by lisae:
This photo really appeals to me. The composition, the subdued lighting, the textures of the background and the apple. I'm giving it 10 - lisae

Undressing
by HillWalk

Comment by aelith:
Neat idea and picture but my monitor shows a lot of loss of detail in the lower right were the shadows are dence and a black blob across the top. Can't hardly wait for square formats.

Undressing
by HillWalk

Comment by jperez1690:
Well arranged composition. The weathered backdrop and roughly peeled apple work well together. I would personally like to see the quarter-tones lightened a bit so the apple might round out a little more. Nice picture. --JPerez

Undressing
by HillWalk

Comment by jkiolbasa:
It's underexposed, and the background is distracting.

Undressing
by HillWalk

Comment by jsabbarton:
This is a superb idea, but there are a few things wrong with the shot. There are two main problems. Firstly, the lighting is very low. While this might be intentional - judging by the title - it doesn't actually work. Primarily, this is because of the background. It's difficult to determine where the subject ends and the background starts. This could be improved by choosing a much brighter (or darker) neutral backdrop. The various scratches, dents and dark shadows distract from the already hard to see central subject. Try using a plain backdrop for the shot to remove the distractions. Next, try lighting the subject with a bounced or heavily diffused flash. White paper held at angle in front of flash unit works quite well – but be careful of your ceiling colour, if it isn't white, you'll get a colour cast. This is only my opinion and I hope I haven't caused offenceâ€Â¦ Good luckâ€Â¦ Keep shootingâ€Â¦

Undressing
by HillWalk

Comment by WJM:
This show quite a bit of creativity on the part of the photographer, but it's too dark and could be a bit sharper. I like the composition, though.

Undressing
by HillWalk

Comment by autool:
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background7,
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing6,
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 8,
Total Averaged Rating7. Autool

Undressing
by HillWalk

Comment by bamaster:
A little dark... even if the apple is "undressing". Some of the details are lost.

Undressing
by HillWalk

Comment by FranziskaLang:
all in all the photo looks a little dark for me, and i'm wondering why you chose the background that you did. it distracts me a little from the apple. interesting title. -- gr8photos.

Undressing
by HillWalk

Comment by pnicholls:
Unattractive background distracts, as does the darker spots on the apple.