Lawn Bales
by tonyv

Comment by SciPug:
A bit oversharpened for my taste. Nice abstract, though.

Lawn Bales
by tonyv

Comment by sherpet:
Nice composition and an interesting image.....

Yellow Rose
by tonyv

Comment by DemonLlama:
I'd check the white balance in post editing, it seems that your yellows are overbearing.

Southern Sun
by tonyv

Comment by L1:
Hi Tony...Greetings from the Critique Club! :)

This is a lovely building and the image itself has a very warm appeal. I think it is a bit too "flat" to really make an impact with voters, however. The colors are nice but not vibrant. I think Rikki hit the nail on the head in his comment about there not being a real interest point as well. I think that a closer shot of the spire, at a different time of day with more light and more saturated color, might really do the building a bit more justice. Voters here don't want just a good picture of a pretty building, they want to be "WOW"ed. ;)

The building also seems to be leaning ever so slightly, so correcting the lens distortion in PS or whichever editing program you use might be helpful.

Keep shooting. You have great images in your portfolio that I could never replicate...just keep clicking! :)

Take care,
Laurie
Critique Club :)

Yellow Rose
by tonyv

Comment by MTPixels:
Very nice!

Yellow Rose
by tonyv

Comment by popdeepop:
Does the light source keep the color correct? Nice frame and background.

Southern Sun
by tonyv

Comment by Rikki:
The color of the building appears to flat against a rather uninteresting sky. The gradiation is there which is great but the image holds hardly any interest for the voters to linger. What is highly effective in architectural type shots is visual interest. The reflections from the adjacent building seems distracting and serves no apparent purpose. Much like other entries I've commented on, this would have been great had a close up view of one of the elements were shown.

Yellow Rose
by tonyv

Comment by Simpa:
very nice...

Yellow Rose
by tonyv

Comment by General:
Now thats impressive, great work, 10

Yellow Rose
by tonyv

Comment by omikeo:
best of my second places