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DigiFotoBuddyComment by Bolti: [Critique club]
Well, this looks like a pretty hard project to use as something for DPC.
Well for starters. This picture is way to crowded, there is a lot going on on the picture and there is hard to focus your attention somewhere. If you would had one kid or something and the family as its background or sometihng this picture realy would work. But now, everyone in the picture are equal wich makes the picture realy hard to focus on.
For the technical part, you should go for a better lightning when you take a shot like this, then you can up your speed a lot and you don't get the problem with the moving legs of the kid or the hand of the litle girl.
Another one is to give people some space, the guy in green on the left lost his but outside the picture, wich makes him kinda out of the picture but not totally. The woman on the far left, her arm is kinda missing and that is not so good either.
Then there is the only thing that realy bugs me on this picture and that is. What tha hell is that pink thing in the bottom left? Remove such things before shootin... hehe
Well hopefully I helped you some with these comments of mine.
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