~ME~
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Comment by mycelium:
I still say you are really hot in this picture :)

~ME~
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Comment by permapier:
Absolutely stunning!

Me
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Comment by NathanWert:

Originally posted by blindjustice: Perhaps a bit more focus in the face? who knows, you still pull it off though.

It does appear like the breast is the focal point and not the face. Strange, maybe it's just us guys.

Either way this is a nice snapshot, but with the focus on the face it would make a great portrait.

Me
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Comment by blindjustice:
I like the black and white and the texture of the shirt; and the expression is great. The body language kind of says "take a look, here it all is" and strangely, the eye is pulled right down to the lowest opening of the shirt; to the tip of the breast; now, this may be the testosterone, or perhaps, and I can only hope, the photographic side of me speaking, but its a bit distracting. Perhaps a bit more focus in the face? who knows, you still pull it off though.

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Comment by HBunch:
Yes, it is a Silver fork. The ones you only bring out on Christmas. And of course to take photos for challenges. lol Thanks for your comments, much appreciated.

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Comment by Di:
***Critique Club***

Hi Heather,

This photo is well thought out, the crop of the fork with spaghetti on it is excellently done. You put just enough on the fork that it didn't take away from it and wound the spaghetti so it looks very well.

The colours look a touch off on the fork. Was it a silver fork? or a stainless steel one? The flatness of it is the only thing I can see that needs improving. Maybe darkening it a touch (not much) would help that. Its possible though if its a Silver fork that this is exactly how it looked.

This photo would easily be sold as stock, and I can see it in a menu or advertisement for a Fine Italian Restaurant.

Di

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Comment by jonr:
A bit flat lighting.

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Comment by unneva:
It's nice but I feel as if it is lacking a little bit of contrast.

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Comment by owen:
Nice clean composition. The spaghetti is perfect colour and light wise. The spoon is a little bit washed out but overall it's a great shot.

~ME~
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Comment by David Ey:
I like what you have done with this photo. Great pose of a beautiful lady. Congratulations on your accomplishments, both in photography and at Weight Watchers.