[ legacy of an era gone by... ]
by saurabhs

Comment by rich:
In the center spire, I would either show a little more detail or silhouette it entirely.

[ acrophobia ]
by saurabhs

Comment by bobdaveant:
A pretty clean shot, almost has a postcard feel to it.

[ legacy of an era gone by... ]
by saurabhs

Comment by kearock:
Too dark. Go for complete silhouette or lighten it up.

[ legacy of an era gone by... ]
by saurabhs

Comment by charmayne:
great shot with a wonderful viewpoint bumping up

[ legacy of an era gone by... ]
by saurabhs

Comment by Coreuk:
This would have been a very good picture, if it just wasnt that dark.
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[ legacy of an era gone by... ]
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Comment by arngrimur:
I think this is too symmetrical for a silhouette photo that is all most two dimensional.

[ legacy of an era gone by... ]
by saurabhs

Comment by dsb_mac:
this is a good frame within a frame. The photo would be improved i think if the subject was exposed normally. perhaps it wasn't an appealing subject so you had to silhouette it.

Empty eyes
by saurabhs

Comment by saurabhs:
Thanks a lot for the criticism. This has been my first few days on dpchallenge and I was testing the water for what the audience type is like. I guess I will have a less abstract entry for the next contest.

thanks again for your time.

regards
saurabh

Originally posted by BAMartin: Greetings from the Critique Club. Composition: This has a nice composition, very balancde. I like how the coils fade into the background. Colors:Black and white was aa very nice choice for this photo, although I suspect the original was close to black and white. Lighting: The lighting seems a little harsh in the upper left, where it reflects off of the top of the coil. I like what you did with the contrast, but it may be a little over the edge for most of the voters. Meeting Challenge: This photo definitely meets the challenge, and its a subject we all see everyday without really looking at it. Border / Title: Your title maybe the best part of the photograph. I like the comparison to eyes. Overall: Overall this is a good photograph, but it does not hold my interest for too long as there does not seem to be a very defined subject. My eyes tend to wander over the entire photograph without finding a place to land.

Empty eyes
by saurabhs

Comment by BAMartin:
Greetings from the Critique Club.

Composition: This has a nice composition, very balancde. I like how the coils fade into the background.

Colors:Black and white was aa very nice choice for this photo, although I suspect the original was close to black and white.

Lighting: The lighting seems a little harsh in the upper left, where it reflects off of the top of the coil. I like what you did with the contrast, but it may be a little over the edge for most of the voters.

Meeting Challenge: This photo definitely meets the challenge, and its a subject we all see everyday without really looking at it.

Border / Title: Your title maybe the best part of the photograph. I like the comparison to eyes.

Overall: Overall this is a good photograph, but it does not hold my interest for too long as there does not seem to be a very defined subject. My eyes tend to wander over the entire photograph without finding a place to land.

Empty eyes
by saurabhs

Comment by decoteau:
Great lighting