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01/10/2005 08:16:15 PM |
Thanks a lot for the criticism. This has been my first few days on dpchallenge and I was testing the water for what the audience type is like. I guess I will have a less abstract entry for the next contest.
thanks again for your time.
regards
saurabh
Originally posted by BAMartin:
Greetings from the Critique Club.
Composition: This has a nice composition, very balancde. I like how the coils fade into the background.
Colors:Black and white was aa very nice choice for this photo, although I suspect the original was close to black and white.
Lighting: The lighting seems a little harsh in the upper left, where it reflects off of the top of the coil. I like what you did with the contrast, but it may be a little over the edge for most of the voters.
Meeting Challenge: This photo definitely meets the challenge, and its a subject we all see everyday without really looking at it.
Border / Title: Your title maybe the best part of the photograph. I like the comparison to eyes.
Overall: Overall this is a good photograph, but it does not hold my interest for too long as there does not seem to be a very defined subject. My eyes tend to wander over the entire photograph without finding a place to land. |
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01/10/2005 09:46:50 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club.
Composition: This has a nice composition, very balancde. I like how the coils fade into the background.
Colors:Black and white was aa very nice choice for this photo, although I suspect the original was close to black and white.
Lighting: The lighting seems a little harsh in the upper left, where it reflects off of the top of the coil. I like what you did with the contrast, but it may be a little over the edge for most of the voters.
Meeting Challenge: This photo definitely meets the challenge, and its a subject we all see everyday without really looking at it.
Border / Title: Your title maybe the best part of the photograph. I like the comparison to eyes.
Overall: Overall this is a good photograph, but it does not hold my interest for too long as there does not seem to be a very defined subject. My eyes tend to wander over the entire photograph without finding a place to land.
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01/04/2005 08:53:12 AM |
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12/31/2004 02:40:40 PM |
| I like the contrast and the way the springs fade into the darkness at the top of the frame. The light smudge at the top left of the left spring is a little distracting, but at the bottom of that left spring, the reflection of light is great. |
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12/30/2004 11:35:03 PM |
| Composition: 7, Technical: 8, Appeal: 8, Challenge: 8, Overall Calculated Average Score: 8 |
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12/30/2004 02:43:26 AM |
| Lots of curb appeal, but it can't sustain my interest. seems tolack critical sharpness also. |
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12/29/2004 09:40:55 PM |
| That's a rockin' image. Extremely creative. My hat goes off to you sir. |
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12/29/2004 09:30:09 AM |
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