Apple
by mrbill

Comment by GinaRothfels:
The apple is much too dark.

Apple
by mrbill

Comment by smshats:
I like that you can really only see the sticker on the apple... but the apple could probably be a little more visable.

Apple
by mrbill

Comment by Swashbuckler:
The part of the apple I see is very nice, what happened to the rest of the apple? The large amount of negative space.....I don't understand why. Good focus on the label, very clear. 7 Swash

Apple
by mrbill

Comment by mci:
nice attempt, but it's just too dark. and the label is the main focus, which isn't very interesting. i'm also not a big fan of "negative space" style shots that place the subject near the top. it makes me feel like the top of the picture is missing, since the subject is "pointing" up, not down. (this placement works when the subject seems to be pointing down). a good effort, but definitely needs more light.

Apple
by mrbill

Comment by Kavey:
I like the darkness but just want a tiny tiny bit more light. Not enough to light the whole apple which would make it too boring but as it stands it's just too dark and undefined for me.
Kavey

Apple
by mrbill

Comment by jkiolbasa:
Why so dark?

Apple
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Comment by autool:
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background4,
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing5,
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 5,
Total Averaged Rating5. Autool

Apple
by mrbill

Comment by crisa58:
too dim on my monitor

Apple
by mrbill

Comment by scw1217:
A little too dark, though I do understand the use of shadows in this photo.

Apple
by mrbill

Comment by jsabbarton:
I like the atmosphere you have created, and the subject is clearly definable. However, whilst I assume this is intentional on your part, I do think it is just a little too dark. Good luckâ€Â¦ (5)