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| 09/15/2008 09:58:26 PM |
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| 09/15/2008 09:18:10 PM |
Muse Verses Celingby Love6Comment by kaiser_chief: This photo doesn't seem to work for me. It meets the challenge, but the lighting fopr me does not help. It casts shaddows which I find distracting. The hair over much of the face also is a bit distracting for me. |
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| 09/15/2008 05:04:39 PM |
Stitchesby Love6Comment by MattO: Greetings from the critique club. How odd the first one I pull from the que is yours. OK here we go
First things I find that might have hurt the score, the catch lights in the eyes are not equal(is that a fongsphere?) One thing that I might have changed to see the texture of the doll a bit is add some directional light. Bring it from the side and lets see some texture and shadows out of all those stitches and cloth. It might also bring the catchlights higher in the eye and make them more natural. Crop is nice and tight, but a little centered I might have experimented with it a few different crops to see which I liked better rather then centered.
I like how you desaturated the colors and have the tones nice and warm. Good luck in future challenges. |
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| 09/15/2008 09:30:10 AM |
Muse Verses Celingby Love6Comment by wishiwaslikeyou: I think you needed to make the ceiling more obvious, its hard for me to distinguish it from the wall behind her. I like the use of black and white though. :). |
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| 09/15/2008 01:56:33 AM |
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| 09/13/2008 05:16:53 PM |
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| 09/13/2008 01:36:23 PM |
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| 09/13/2008 11:46:26 AM |
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| 09/12/2008 06:18:43 PM |
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| 09/12/2008 03:11:32 PM |
Self Portraitby Love6Comment by tate: I'm at work so I can't look.
But my gut reaction is that I like it because my internal programming told me to. |
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