Waiting for Him
by jacinda80

Comment by cheekymunky:
Would have worked well for moods as well. I might have cropped it a bit tighter, I find the pattern on the curtains a bit distracting, but doesnt detract from an emotive image.

Waiting for Him
by jacinda80

Comment by tazza:
Nice atmosphere very good light on the girl, but not too keen about the blank wall behind her

Waiting for Him
by jacinda80

Comment by emorgan49:
Very nice use of color - I like the way the green of her clothing, headskarf are picked up by the leaves and the window frame also looks green. shapes too: leaves, paisley print and her ear lips and collarbone.

Waiting for Him
by jacinda80

Comment by BAMartin:
I wish there was just a tiny little bit more light on her face. Overall, very well done!

Waiting for Him
by jacinda80

Comment by frumoaznicul:
Since this is a composition based on light and shadow, I would have probably chosen to make it a black&white or some duotone, also I think it would have a much better impact if you would crop more from the right, up over her sholder. Anyways I like it, verry nice pose and I really like how the light is working. Good luck!

Waiting for Him
by jacinda80

Comment by jemison:
wish you had made better use of that nice window light. Her face is too dark - can't make up my mind whether you intended a silhouette shot or what. the title, though not influencing my vote, is trite and, imo, demeaning to the gender.

Waiting for Him
by jacinda80

Comment by Zapperzac:
could be lighter

Waiting for Him
by jacinda80

Comment by bryanbrazil:
Her face is a little dark for me.

Waiting for Him
by jacinda80

Comment by Catherine_B:
the molding coming out behind her neck is distracting. Remember to look at what is behind your subject not just at the subject

Waiting for Him
by jacinda80

Comment by e301:
Nice light. But, composition? I'm not convinced that this is really strong - or rather, as strong as this scene could be: it might feel less likely, but a half pace to your right, and you'd have an expanse of light with your model in her beautiful light to one side quite strongly. Just a thought, but I can almost picture it.