An eewie oops!by
ladyanniComment by HBunch: *Critique Club*
Looks like an error in submission got your the brown ribbon. By the title, looks like this was meant to be in the oops challenge, and obviously, people noticed.
You requested an in depth critique, however, have not been back since you submitted your photo to even look at the feedback you recieved, which leads me to believe that you don't really care, and this will be a complete waste of my time, however, here is the in depth critique you requested from the Critique Club...
Since you give me no photographers comments, my critique can only be based on personal opinion alone, since I have no clue what your intentions were with this photo. In the future, if you would like a more technical critique, please include some photographer's comments letting us know what you were trying to achieve.
My first reaction to the photo is that it's not a very appealing image. Who wants to look at a photo of someone who's trying to keep snot from hanging out of their nose? Do I have a personal attachment to this photo? Certainly not.
The colors look like they are very nice, but the forground and subject are a bit dark, which mutes the colors a bit.
The thing hanging from the top right of the photo (roof or umbrella?) is distracting.
The focus is soft. A more crisp focus would help to bring out some detail and add something to look at.
The angle is also awkward. Looks like you were sitting in a chair or something when you took this pic. Either that or you are really short, in that case, my apologies. I would prefer to see this from a more eye level view.
Overall nice color, but just not appealing to me on a personal level. ~Heather~
