The Art of Art
by shabbychic

Comment by hotpasta:
Lovely shot...just with there was a little more light on her beatiful face...

The Art of Art
by shabbychic

Comment by TrollMan:
Great shot. A splash of color on the brush would have made it even etter for me but it's a 9 from me anyway.

The Art of Art
by shabbychic

Comment by sherpet:
Nice idea that works for me...

Spring Fever
by shabbychic

Comment by Jutilda:
WOW - what a terrific story. The image is just killer! Great perspective and use of off center. Man, isn't grass the best? I do the same thing.

My Yellow Beach Cruiser
by shabbychic

Comment by kari1:
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:

Love the de-sat (can't often say that) ... and the smile on her face ... she may have been nervous but she did well.

Composition:
I liked this ... you have the bottom rails on thirds which is nice ... having it with her a little further into the shot may have created a leaving something as well as a going somewhere impression.

Subject:
Crikey this meets the challenge and does it good.

Technical (Colour and light):
I really think that this look works well for this picture.

To grow its vote?:
as mentioned above ... that is all i can think of.

Summary:
I think thsi is really lovely .. and I hope you looked after your model after she fell off.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

Cheers

Kari

I Didn't Do It
by shabbychic

Comment by UpUpCanadian:
really great.

A Nice Ride
by shabbychic

Comment by Jutilda:
OH cute! I love her thrown back head - like she's having so much fun riding that bike. Good job!!!

A Nice Ride
by shabbychic

Comment by newty1:
a great feeling to this image very nice :)

A Nice Ride
by shabbychic

Comment by CalliopeKel:
Your photography style matches your username, very clever.

My Yellow Beach Cruiser
by shabbychic

Comment by shabbychic:

Originally posted by Hawkeye: Interesting subject. It looks like she is super nervous - hasn't been on a bike for a while? Quite a challenge in high heels!

She was very nervous- she fell off the bike a few times. :-)