Bring a Pen and Paper
by zadore

Comment by undieyatch:
i think the soft focus was used intentionally......... it certianly makes the image more interesting.

Bring a Pen and Paper
by zadore

Comment by jmsetzler:
This is really a great idea and the composition is also great... My mind is begging for stronger focus on this pen, but somehow the softness of it still is quite gripping in some strange way... good work :) = 8 - jmsetzler

Bring a Pen and Paper
by zadore

Comment by Ricky Cleave:
Looks out of focus

Bring a Pen and Paper
by zadore

Comment by sulamk:
Composition:good but th image is out of focus 4
Lighting: good 5,
Appeal: 4, Total Rating 4 Sulamk

Bring a Pen and Paper
by zadore

Comment by razwan:
This is one of the best uses if neg. space I have seen here. The white background is appropriate (and hence makes the photo work well). Perhpaps the pen is a little too out of fcus for my liking, was the focus intentional? I like the shadow. Scores highly for use of neg. space, loses a little because of focus. Excellent work overall!

Bring a Pen and Paper
by zadore

Comment by spiderman:
focus scores better - 6