A Night at Beach
by arpitmittal

Comment by UNCLEBRO:
I see what you were going for here, but the land light has blown out too much and there isn't anything really interesting happening in the sky.

A Night at Beach
by arpitmittal

Comment by margiemu:
The overblown lights reflecting off the white building are a little distracting. Very nice colors though.

A Night at Beach
by arpitmittal

Comment by Nuzzer:
The bright light is a bit too bright

One Out Of Many
by arpitmittal

Comment by arpitmittal:
Guys can you tell me how i can make it off-center composition.

A Night at Beach
by arpitmittal

Comment by jonatanpapp:
I feel it would have been better if you made the shot a few minutes earlier, so the sky could be brighter.

One Out Of Many
by arpitmittal

Comment by sherpet:
Lovely image here.....

One Out Of Many
by arpitmittal

Comment by jurassic:
Nice crisp shot but it doesn't really use perspective in a dramatic way. A different off-center composition could make it more interesting as well.

One Out Of Many
by arpitmittal

Comment by LalliSig:
Not bad really but the composition could be much better, way too centered for my taste.

Where there is Darkness there is a Light of Hope!
by arpitmittal

Comment by arpitmittal:
thanks stdavidson for your valuable comments. They are really helpfull for me.

Where there is Darkness there is a Light of Hope!
by arpitmittal

Comment by Artifacts:
There is little in this composition to entice voters to give it a high score.

The technical quality is generally decent except for electronic noise that probably should be removed. The overexposed ligh streak lacks viewer interest.

It is the composition that will give voters a problem. There is little in the composition that a viewer can relate to. Nothing wrong with abstract images, but you have to give the viewer something to relate it to. You suffer from the double whammy that abstracts generally are not accepted all that well by this group.

The viewer's first impression is, "What is this?" It really does not provide them with a enough reason or desire to speculate.

Something you might do to increase interest would be to used multi-colored lighting. This image, though in color, really does not have any. Nice strong reds, greens or blues would make this a lot more pleasing and interesting for viewers.