Luminescence
by bryantbus

Comment by glad2badad:
Nice composition. The fan adds a nice touch. The eyes are well focused, which is good, but the makeup (white streak) is not so flattering. A little over the top on the red lipstick as well. Probably what you were going for, but not overly appealing for me personally. Also just noticed that the area under her chin appears yellowish in relation to the rest of her face and neck. Good luck in the challenge.

Luminescence
by bryantbus

Comment by Blackbox:
I think I've seen her before in the challenges. The color contrast is great and a very professional looking photo. I think it will make the top 10 for sure.

Luminescence
by bryantbus

Comment by 777STAN:
Clearly Brilliant! :)

Luminescence
by bryantbus

Comment by Nald:
Returning for comments.

Very high-key, and I like it! I feel like busting out some old Duran Duran or Siouxsie and the Banshees albums right now. Great framing of the subject and you've really pulled off the high-key shot without over doing it IMHO.

Hot Pursuit
by bryantbus

Comment by sacredspirit:
The overall photo is coming out flat. The colors, and the set-up in general just dont pop out there. I don't know how one would go about making it better. Still an overall success, I'm going with an 8.

Hot Pursuit
by bryantbus

Comment by mamba:
good title. it hlps to convey what you were going for here. there is a mark on the window that is a little distracting and the ill fiting glove is also a slight annoyance but other than that good work.

Hot Pursuit
by bryantbus

Comment by sherpet:
It this for real...

Hot Pursuit
by bryantbus

Comment by h2:
nice idea, but really bad crop at top, right and bottom. note: never crop at the joints. reflecting sunglasses would have been a nice touch

Luminescence
by bryantbus

Comment by diffraction:
I find her ear and earring distracting. I think a different crop would really improve this image. Eliminateing the ear and hair would draw more attention to the dramatic eyes.

Hot Pursuit
by bryantbus

Comment by Citadel:
I'd have to say that technically this picture is fine. Its the concept that is bothering me unfortunately.