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by bryantbus

Comment by Jaded_Housewife:
im sure you wanted the viewer to notice the window trim but i would have preffered a closer crop on the frame containing the face. otherwise. nice photo!

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Comment by imagine74:
Good composition

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Comment by love:
too oooey and gooey for me

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Comment by TheStick:
Major cuteness factor! What a wonderful expression. This will do well!

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Comment by hotpasta:
nice portrait...well done...the blue and the golden hair lopok great together

The Look
by bryantbus

Comment by BakerBug:
Hello from the Critique Club

Let me start out by saying I gave this photo a seven. It is a very alluring pose that is seductive but not overly so. The model's expression is perfect, she draws your eyes in and holds them and that gives this shot a lot of impact.

The main thing that bothers me about this shot is the camera position. At this angle, it appears that her feet would be elevated above her head. This gives it a subtle feeling of tension that seems out of place. I tinkered around in Photoshop and rotated the image 25 degrees CCW. This put her in a position where her feet would be in a slightly lower than her head and gave it a much more relaxed feel.

I might also crop out the bottom of the bed. What appears to be a metal frame detracts from the feeling of softness in the rest of the composition.

Your comment made me think you might not be satisfied with the work you did on her eyes. I think you did really well with this. Her eyes really stand out, but you didn't take it too far.

Well done!

-Bill

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by bryantbus

Comment by PhantomEWO:
cute!

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Comment by mpeters:
lively and cute

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Comment by C-town driver:
Cute. Technicals are very good. Has a bit too much of a pre-meditated "catalogue" feel for my tastes, but nice shot nontheless... my vote is a 7

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Comment by whiteroom:
gorgeous model :)