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| 12/22/2002 01:06:02 AM |
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| 12/20/2002 11:12:32 AM |
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| 12/19/2002 12:01:13 PM |
Courtsideby MarshaComment by crabappl3: ~~~~Critique Club Comment~~~~
Courtside
Composition (Content)
You have captured motion perfectly. The fact that everything but the girls running are sharp and in focus is terrific. I will tend to agree with the other comments that some different crops may have worked better. I'm thinking portrait mode closer in on the players just left of the coach standing on the left side and just right of the last running player on the right. Keep the bee and the some of the foreground court.
Background
White balance may be an issue, but not a major distraction. Did you NeatImage this? It's very clean of noise. Excellent DOF.
Camera Work (Technical)
Good shutter speed used to capture the motion of the girls running but not so long as to blur the people moving in the background.
Digital Processing (Technical)
Sharpening is good( Doesn't look like you over sharpened this photo)
Balance between light and dark is good. ( Good job considering the location)
Compression is good( No noticeable compression artifacts)
My opinion
I like this shot a lot. Different crops may have made it an even stronger shot.
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| 12/18/2002 08:48:32 AM |
What I do most of the timeby MarshaComment by Harz_Joerg: I like the various colors and the gradient of the green. Also a wonderful collection of portraits you show to us.
Of course, without title nobody would think it has something to do with "occupation", but that's a problem of most submissions.
Sad that one sees the white wall in the lower left corner. |
| 12/18/2002 01:46:51 AM |
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| 12/18/2002 12:39:52 AM |
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| 12/16/2002 09:51:46 PM |
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| 12/16/2002 03:43:24 PM |
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| 12/16/2002 01:47:57 AM |
What I do most of the timeby MarshaComment by Jenguin: that's how i want my walls to look -- very interesting layout .. and ya know even without the title its easy to see that photography is your thing. |
| 12/15/2002 06:47:41 PM |
Courtsideby MarshaComment by GeneralE: Don't think you need so much bakground -- I'd crop tighter to the group of running players, maybe a vertical cr if you really want to include the logo. |
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