Making a splash in 2005
by joynim

Comment by Kelli:
Nice colors. I know the splash is the focus of the picture, but I would have liked it better if her head wasn't cut off.

Making a splash in 2005
by joynim

Comment by sherpet:
What fun, and thats what you have captured...

Making a splash in 2005
by joynim

Comment by ShutterPug:
crop is too tight - would like to see more of the scene taking place here.

Making a splash in 2005
by joynim

Comment by A_lack_of_color:
out of focus

Making a splash in 2005
by joynim

Comment by tonyv:
I think that this would have bee much better if her face was visible. The colours also need saturating.

Making a splash in 2005
by joynim

Comment by LN13:
This seems poorly focised to me.

Making a splash in 2005
by joynim

Comment by cfischl:
main subject seems slightly blurry

Making a splash in 2005
by joynim

Comment by angela_packard:
8 from me...good luck!

Making a splash in 2005
by joynim

Comment by emorgan49:
Wow- the splash looks like a little angel in her hands! I LOVE parts of this image but something about the composition as a whole doesn't work as well as its parts. The colors are delightfully subtle. The background tile floor is especially intriuing witht the water over it, I wish there were more of ot in the shot to balance the weight of the little girl. I love the way the colors of her bathing suit are matched but the reflections on the water. The leading lines (arms, legs and tiles) all point to the angel which is in a good rule-of-thirds spot. I can't quite figure out what makes this a 7 shot instead of a 10.

Making a splash in 2005
by joynim

Comment by Konador:
I think a less tight crop would be better here, since her legs and half her head are both cut off. Also, a faster shutter speed would capture the water better and not have so much motion blur on the child either. The photo also lacks contrast too, so a small increase in post-processing would do it good I think :)