Dark and Light -- Chocolateby
4ROGGYCHEFComment by mesmeraj: ~~Critiques Club~~
Well this image is just a chocoholics dream. I love it as an intereptation of dark and light.
The focus and lighting look good on the milk chocchips, but neither is quite at its peak on the white chocolate. It seems although the lense may have nee vignetting the edges?
For a still life of as small an object as chocchips,., i would have been incled to use a fine grained iso. Detailas are translated more smoothly in this manner, making macros more appealing.
I am distracted by the marks of milk choc left on the bar of dark choc in the front - being advanced editting, i would have bene inclied to clone them out.
Personally i am not sure such large blocks of dark work in the front of the image, with the much smaller white chips hidden behind it. The dar chocolate you have in the back that is divided into squares would have made a more balanced compositionimho.
I do like that you piled the chocolate in layers rather than a ridgid row or stack. This added element of fun makes the image more interesting.
So... did you eat it all after got got done shooting? I would have!
Any Qs or comments, feel free to PM me
Cheers
Elli
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