Wish You Were Here
by xtine

Comment by posthumous:
Well seen. 7

Wish You Were Here
by xtine

Comment by coolblue:
lacks impact

Wish You Were Here
by xtine

Comment by alexjack:
tecnically the photo looks fine, nice b&w conversion with a good range in tones, I can't tell if the building is slanted or picture is, the roof tends to drop to the R. compositionally i see the relationship to the title and "postcards" but other than the girl there isn't much of interest. the building itself is very static with hard horizontal and vertical lines that may have been better if you'd tilted the camera to give a diagonal to them, another approach may have been to blur the girls motion to imply "lets get outta here" or something similar. hope this does well, you've got some nice ideas hear and good vision to see the opportunities too

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Jack

Wish You Were Here
by xtine

Comment by Brad:
Clever title with the Postcards on the building. Nice B&W.

Wish You Were Here
by xtine

Comment by cogerox:
Its a small detail, but her feet are out of the picture which keeps this from feeling complete. Otherwise, I like the candid nature of this shot.

Wish You Were Here
by xtine

Comment by Dirt_Diver:
Great depth with this B&W. A lot have been flat and this one really has a depth to it. Good work.

Wish You Were Here
by xtine

Comment by boysetsfire:
im not sure if anybody could think of a better title for this, i always end up cutting people feet off too! not sure if you means it or not either way i couldnt care less. i really like this.

Wish You Were Here
by xtine

Comment by bassbone:
i really like this b/w photo a lot - the textures are outstanding, the tones wonderful, and the sighn and girl just set it out.

Wish You Were Here
by xtine

Comment by abranton:
With the title it seems there would be some more focus on the girl. Looking at this picture the focus is the building, maybe the building wishes you were there. hehe. Good photo.

Wish You Were Here
by xtine

Comment by cpanaioti:
I like the composition and you've got good tonality. Too bad her feet are cut off though.