Mmmmm chocolate....
by Tim

Comment by crik:
Clean, sharp image. Nice work.

Mmmmm chocolate....
by Tim

Comment by kat75:
This is great! The only thing that would have made it better is if the M's were not as worn in the ones that were prominently featured, and maybe if only one peanut M&M was halved, right up front. I bet you had fun prepping this. :) "Hmm, that one doesnt look right. *CRUNCH*"

Mmmmm chocolate....
by Tim

Comment by sherpet:
Clear, sharp, colorful, and also very yummy.....

Mmmmm chocolate....
by Tim

Comment by Nightson:
Lighting on this one could be better, bringing out the colors more would make it very nice

Mmmmm chocolate....
by Tim

Comment by BlackNewfs:
I like what you have done here, I just found the lighting a tad harsh.

Sunlit grass
by Tim

Comment by moniepenny:
Looks like a watercolor painting. : )

Mmmmm chocolate....
by Tim

Comment by jgm5015:
just a tad over-exposed for my tastes, otherwise great!

Cut Flowers
by Tim

Comment by fotomann_forever:
::: Greetings from Critique Club :::

Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.

First Impression - the most important one:
You've made this critique pretty easy on me, because you see most of the issues with the photo yourself. Overall, the photo is intriguing though.

Composition:
I'm not fond of the centered vertically comp in this photo. I think shifting the whole composition to the bottom of the frame would have worked better for you.

Subject:
I think the light and texture of the cutting board emphasize your subject well. Good job there. The cutting board was a good idea.

Technical (Color, focus, and light):
Color: I like the B&W conversion technique. It might be a bit too contrasty though, you may want to scale it back some.
Focus: You see the issues yourself, just a bit soft.
Light: Blown highlights as you said.

To grow its vote?:
The technical issues you brought up: so you know where the shot went wrong. Also, a little stronger composition would have helped.

Summary:
I like the idea and the shot. I kinda like that the flower is closed, it seems to work well with the dark photo.

Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy

blue-pool.jpg
by Tim

Comment by LalliSig:
This one I don´t like as much, mainly the colors and color scheme in it, the sky looks too purple and odd somehow and it looks a bit oversaturated, I just don´t plainly like the color toning in the image. Nice composition though and seems well exposed.

Misty (take 2)
by Tim

Comment by LalliSig:
I like it, I normally hate softfocus or foggy shots but this one works, great mood in it. Would have liked a slightly wider look though to include a little bit more to the right and bottom just slightly more of the path but that´s it. Nice work!