Birthday Cake
by jkb1

Comment by Elaine:
This has more of a snapshot feel. A solid background would help. With this shot I would have cropped next to the stove. Also, the utensils are more in focus than she and the cake are.

Birthday Cake
by jkb1

Comment by TOY:
what kinda cake is that????? urgh!!!

Birthday Cake
by jkb1

Comment by Makka:
Is that a cake??? Mwuhahahaha....unfortunately the focus seems to be at the back of the photo instead of the front!

The Garden of Eden
by jkb1

Comment by MPRPRO:
I would have left all the color in. Just me.

The Garden of Eden
by jkb1

Comment by trishialw:
Looks like she has lipstick on. I think real bright red lipstick could have made the photo a littl more dramatic.

The Garden of Eden
by jkb1

Comment by CNovack:
Composition could have been improved if there was more red injected into the picture. The pose is just fine, that I would definately keep. But with the green apple you really needed to play up the complementary color of red and that could have been done with a red dress/shirt, red lipstick, and nails painted a deep red color -thus it would invoke not only the imagery associated with the eating of the apple at Eden but also the apple that Snow White ate (only with an inverse in color since the apple was red - different but still good to be a little different in approach since the color green symbolizes spring/fertility/renewal).

The Garden of Eden
by jkb1

Comment by tonyv:
There seems to be a blue cast on the picture. I think that it would have been more effective if the mouth was redder (lipstick?). And maybe pursed lips would have been better than the open mouth.

The Garden of Eden
by jkb1

Comment by Elaine:
I think her lipstick should have been true red.

The Garden of Eden
by jkb1

Comment by persimon:
This image needs more pink. Maybe a pink shirt, more tongue, pink fingernail polish. The blue dominates the pink, thereby causing the green and pink to lose impact. Nice comp, clear image.

The Garden of Eden
by jkb1

Comment by AzCKelly:
Good Picture, love the apple. Might have cropped tighter from the left to really bring out the color in the lips.