Cooking (within limits)
by olbol

Comment by GolferDDS:
I like the idea but the lighting needs work. It seems overexposed in several places.

Afternoon in Istanbul
by olbol

Comment by karmat:
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat

Compositionally, you have some interesting elements in this. The woman walking, the car and the clothesline all give the eye something to follow throughout the picture. In that sense, it is a well-composed shot. It feels like it is "leaning" slightly to the right though. I'm also wondering how a horizontal crop of this same scene would look? That would help give the viewer more of a context of the street, but I also think that it would help to lessen the distraction that the dark thing in the upper left corner is providing.

Technically, the bright colors really liven this up. There are a lot of yellow/gold/orange tones and I think a touch of contrast might help make those a bit more bold and ready to *pop.* OR a touch of overall contrast may help as well to help emphasize the boldness of the shot.

Overall, a very interesting shot.

If I need to further clarify or explain myself, please feel free to contact me.

karma

Afternoon in Istanbul
by olbol

Comment by Melethia:
What a colorful place! Nicely composed - nice light, too.

Ready to go
by olbol

Comment by IreneM:
The focus seems to be off here. Nice idea though.

Ready to go
by olbol

Comment by lucifero:
too short DOF

Ready to go
by olbol

Comment by sevilduvarci:
love the DOF.

Gene modification, cucumatos batch no.1
by olbol

Comment by carofo:
A great idea!! 7

Gene modification, cucumatos batch no.1
by olbol

Comment by the99:
interesting composition

Gene modification, cucumatos batch no.1
by olbol

Comment by Emerkaza:
Let me know if this works.....I love cucumbers and tomatoes!

Gene modification, cucumatos batch no.1
by olbol

Comment by UNTITLED:
The color tones and patterns are great...a very interesting abstract indeed. Great job!