Sky Highwayby
cubixComment by fotomann_forever: ::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
Very abstract, nice and clean.
Composition:
very interesting indeed, but I like to see the bottom cropped so that the jet stream meets with the bottom left corner to give the line a full diagonal feel.
Subject:
More of an abstract image, so subject isn't its focus.
Technical (Colour, focus, and light):
Color is great... that's pretty much the blue I see when I look at the sky.
Focus is sharp, nice detail on that moon.
Exposure is very good.
To grow its vote?:
For this challenge, I'd expect you were a little outside the box. Voters were, for the most part, looking for roads, or at least things that very much resembled roads.
Summary:
Nice abstract, good color and exposre. Think you've got technicals down pretty well.
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy