Maori Taneby
lahulfmanComment by xianart: Critique Club
Hi, my name is Christian; I̢۪m from the critique club, and WOOHOO! I love this image. As I said when I commented on it during voting. So...
The subject works very well, serious, beautiful, yet not threatening. Rather than a possible arrogance which could be shown in the face of a traditional warrior, there is instead dignity, wisdom and gravitas. A hint of sorrow?
The focus on the eyes is superb, with a detail and limpidity that make them seem truly alive.
The composition works very well; the tight crop really insisting we look into the subject̢۪s eyes, making the connection. The lines of the tattoo bring you in and through to the eyes, on an unending loop. Which I̢۪m sure was the original intent in traditional facework like this. The lines of the tattoo themselves are lovely, and they work in such harmony with his face.
The tones work well, a full tonal range, leaning toward the contrasty. Very nice indeed.
While some may have not agreed with the green cast, I find it quite effective. Despite his overwhelming humanity, the green does separate him, make him slightly otherworldly. Monumental.
Well done indeed. Would I change anything? No.
If you have any questions, please pm me.
Cheers,
C.
p.s. i gave you a 9 in voting
Message edited by author 2006-09-14 19:52:32.