Leafy Sea Dragon
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shadowdoc31Comment by taterbug: Greetings from the Critique Club :-)
Congrats on your first ribbon! A fine shot. That is an amazing looking creature. Well, this is your entry in the 'Master of Disguise' challenge. I think it is easy to say that your shot definitely fits the challenge. My first impression when looking at this photo is wow, what an incredible creature. And presented in such a vivid and strong manner. Also, assuming it is probably an aquarium shot, and knowing the conditions of most aquariums (lighting, glass, people and such) I figure a lot of care and effort went into getting this beautiful image.
Technically, a superb job. Dof is great, the animal is crisp and clear, and plenty of detail present. Your processing is good. Lovely colors, and as I said initially, a very vivid and eyecatching image. You've put together a wonderful composition, IMO. Full framed subject, and it makes a great vertical across the image. I like that you have included the plants at left. I believe they are a strong element to the image. They provide context to the scene. They add a little something more to look at and the way the bottom kind of curves around and subtly frames the sea dragon, I think they help to keep the viewer engaged on the main subject. Without them, you would still have this nicely detailed, fascinating animal, but just him on a blue background, and I just don't think nearly as strong a presentation.
So, yes there is the plant, or whatever the thing is that is behind and to the right of his head. But it is a minor, very minor distraction. It is not noticeable at first glance, and is only seen once the viewer gets into studying and appreciating the photo. By that time, you have already won over the audience and they would be quite forgiving of that little flaw. The only other thing I might point out is, and again, it is very minor, just left of center almost to the bottom of the plant, there is a whitish spot on the blue, between the plant leaves. Looks like it could possibly be just a touch of glare or something. If you were say, getting this ready for a print, perhaps you might want to try and clone out that spot and the before mentioned plant to the right of the head.
This is a very stunning photo. Grabs your attention and demands you stay and look for awhile. I think it would make a beautiful print. A very fine job, and very well deserving of the ribbon. Congratulations again.
If you have any questions, or comments, or anything, feel free to contact me.
taterbug :-)
