Neon at Night
by NoahGoldman

Comment by bvoi:
Good job breaking your high score.

Neon at Night
by NoahGoldman

Comment by lucienaw:
Good photograph, shame the building to the right is blurred, kinda ruins the overall effect. 6

"Look Before You Leap"
by NoahGoldman

Comment by karmat:
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by karmat

Very interesting shot. Glad I was not your model! You do well at giving the impression of extreme height (perhaps because it is extreme height)and that helps to draw the viewer into the picture and make it interesting for them.

Initially, the composition works because having the guy in the left 1/3 of the frame gives it a stable feeling, but then I saw that little tiny dude "behind" the subject. Because the viewer tends to look in front of the subject (on the right), the little spot may be missed and it helps to add to the feeling of height even more.

Technically, the exposure seems okay, there are details throughout, but the saturation seems a bit strong, especially on the skin tones.

Good work and best wishes in future challenges.
karmat

Neon at Night
by NoahGoldman

Comment by sfalice:
Nice graphic. Quite strong, actually.

Neon at Night
by NoahGoldman

Comment by pineapple:
Nice clean shot but a little too literal for my taste. The upper right lacks interest.

Neon at Night
by NoahGoldman

Comment by rkligman:
Oh, so close to getting it all. Love the brightness, contrast color. Too bad you couldn't move the stuff in front. - 7

Neon at Night
by NoahGoldman

Comment by Cam:
Cool shot. It may not be a strike, but I think its a spare. Well composed, great colors and focus. Very ncie.

Neon at Night
by NoahGoldman

Comment by KiwiShotz:
Like the colout/texture of the foreground building too

Neon at Night
by NoahGoldman

Comment by sjturner:
a bit too plain & simple but still a good image

"Look Before You Leap"
by NoahGoldman

Comment by JunieMoon:
Color may have been adjusted too much in to yellow. changed the overall color of the skin and rock. Nice angle.