Kamasutra Scene
by dube140463

Comment by tate:
Looks like an existing artwork.

Kamasutra Scene
by dube140463

Comment by sherpet:
"WOW" very intense and very good.....this would make a wonderful fabric/design for all types of homeware products.....

Crazy Chrome Idea
by dube140463

Comment by BakerBug:
Hello from the Critique Club!

My first impression is that the background really steals the attention from the subject. Since the background is the only real source of color, and it is very high contrast, it prevents your eye from resting comfortably on the subject. This may have worked better with a solid color background, maybe black. This would force your eye back on to the subject.

The lighting also seems a bit soft. It appears to me that there may be two light sources. One above the subject (the bedside lamp?), and the second across the room from the subject (maybe a window?). Neither light source is very dramatic. A single bright light that would create some interesting reflections on the metal would add some punch to this photo. This would also sharpen the picture more.

One other thing to consider is using the full file size available to you. This picture is only 82k. You are allowed up to 150k. That extra resolution can do nothing but help. It allows for more detail in your picture, and in this case may increase the sharpness some!

-Bill

Heritage Cameo - Camée
by dube140463

Comment by mk:
I'm not quite sure what you're using as a backdrop here but it distracts quite a bit from your subject.

Heritage Cameo - Camée
by dube140463

Comment by Rebecca:
The cameo itself is out of focus - looks like the blanket it's resting on is a lot sharper in the foreground.

Heritage Cameo - Camée
by dube140463

Comment by blondmcfly:
The bracelet is lovely but the background is a little too distracting.

Heritage Cameo - Camée
by dube140463

Comment by Younger:
The bracelett is beautiful the background is not.
Good try.

Heritage Cameo - Camée
by dube140463

Comment by TooCool:
I believe that your choice of background detracts from the awesome piece of jewelry...
TC

Spicy Color
by dube140463

Comment by TroyMosley:
***Greeting From the Critique club***

First off i just have to say thankyou for entering the challenge

when i first see your photo i think cool good subject

some improvments

Filter that light its way too bright.
Its really not that sharp, mayb a tripod or siting on something would be good.

maybe try a different angle, straight on is boring, try brom below or above right and left.

Sustains.
fill the fram for impact, thats good.

good ideas,

and passion for photography, you have the idea just formulat it a little more.

Crazy Chrome Idea
by dube140463

Comment by YourBuddyFlo:
i like it but im not sure about the rainbow colours